Talk:2020 Macau Grand Prix

Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 9 May 2021 (UTC)Reply


  • ", part of" and was part of? This sentence isn't scanning quite right for me at the moment.
  • "Smart Life Racing" in the lead and "Smart Racing Life" in the main text, check throughout.
  • "from the pole position" no need for "the".
  • "22 November, 2020 with" no comma needed.
  • "first time in 2019, the series" again, doesn't scan, are these really separate sentences?
  • "nearly every driver" perhaps "most drivers"
  • "two minutes, 34.106 seconds" it would be easier to read this as "2 minutes, 34.106 seconds"
  • No good reason to reduce size of text in the table.
  • Q1 Time -> Q1 time etc.
  • Check MOS:BOLD for the use of bold only, people with accessibility issues may not easily be able to pick out bold alone.
  • MOS FLAG, those should be explained at least on the first use.
  • I guess "gap" applies to the best lap time for each driver?
  • "to set the" to determine the
  • "local time" which was?
  • In sortable tables, linked items should be linked each time.
  • Does en-dash mean retired? Shouldn't it say "retired"?

That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:09, 12 May 2021 (UTC)Reply