Talk:2020 Players Championship (snooker)/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
Shall review for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Image caption
edit- "Judd Trump won the event, his sixth championship of the season" - picture two caption has a factual error in bold
Lead
edit- "and the second leg of the Coral Series." - Coral Cup
- These terms are interchangable as per [1]. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- "It was the 16th ranking title of Trump's career, and his fifth ranking title of the season." - repetition of "title"
- done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- The above text will also need mentioning in the prose
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- "With it, he equalled the record held jointly by Stephen Hendry, Ding Junhui, Mark Selby and O'Sullivan for the most ranking titles in a single season." - needs to be mentioned in the prose with a reliable source verifying it
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- "the highest of which was a 140 made by Neil Robertson." - in which round and which frame was the 140 break made?
- done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Format
edit- "Points scored at events from the 2019 Riga Masters until the 2020 Snooker Shoot Out added towards qualifying for the event." - were added towards qualifying for the tournament.
- "It was the 13th ranking event of the snooker season," - should be 14th
- Wikilink world rankings to the relevant article
- "with the 2020 World Grand Prix and Tour Championship." - some words missing from this text
- Fixed all. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:14, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Prize fund
edit- "with £125,000 to the winner." - going to or awarded
- fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:08, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Summary
edit- "Murphy led 4–1, was pegged back to 5-5" - Murphy, who led 4–1, was pegged back to 5–5
- "The quarter-finals were played between 26 and 28 February." - how about from 26 to 28 February.
- "World number one Trump defeated Higgins 6–3," - no mention of Trump being world number one in the Sporting Life source verifying this information
- Wikilink break to the relevant article for non-snooker readers only on the first mention
- "Maguire won the match in frame 11, his second 6–5 win of the tournament." - repetition of "wo(i)n"
- "but Magurire won the next four frame." - spelling error
- "Murphy won the opening three frames," - BBC Sport says it was the first two frames
- The term session can be wikilinked to the correct article so that non-snooker readers can find out its meaning
- "Trump won the two following frames to win the match 10–4," - repetition of "wo(i)n"
- I have covered these. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:16, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Century breaks
edit- "the highest of which was a 140 made by Neil Robertson." - in which match and which frame did Robertson make his 140 break
- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:08, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
References
edit- The work in WPBSA sources should be either worldsnooker.com or World Snooker not a mix of both
- Same with all the Sporting Life references
- All those references missing publication dates, accessdates and authors need to be amended to include them
- Reference 8 is a duplicate of Reference 4
- Reference 23 does not linked to that of the centuries made during the 2020 Players Championship
- Added archive. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:02, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Shall put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 17:37, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
- I have covered these MWright96. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Lee Vilenski: Much of the points in the Reference section have still not been addressed; have fixed one wikilink error MWright96 (talk) 17:26, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- I think I have all these now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Lee Vilenski: I went ahead and added more relevant data into the references for more completeness. Aside from that, am now promoting this article to GA status MWright96 (talk) 11:58, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
- I think I have all these now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 21:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Lee Vilenski: Much of the points in the Reference section have still not been addressed; have fixed one wikilink error MWright96 (talk) 17:26, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- I have covered these MWright96. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)