Talk:2020 Welsh Open (snooker)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:52, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Shall review for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 06:52, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• The three flagicons should be replaced by the flagathlete templates as has been done in the main draw section

Lead

• "It was the 12th ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season, and the final event of the season's Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event"
  • Changed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:07, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• "the highest made by Wilson made the highest," - repetition of "made the highest"
  • Changed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:07, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

Format

• "the twelfth edition of the event." - 29th
  • My mistake! Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:14, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• The term frame should be wikilinked to the appropriate article only on the first mention
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:14, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• Who broadcast the tournament internationally?
  • I'm wondering if maybe I should do these as a table in future. Food for thought, added. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:14, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

Prize fund

• The prize for the maximum break and the total prize fund need to be verified by a reliable source
  • Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:08, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Summary

• "Ashley Carty defeated Joe Perry, seeded 17th" - missing a comma at the end of this text
• The above text needs verifying with a reliable source since World Snooker does not mention Perry was seeded 17th
  • Removed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Kyren Wilson defeated Jackson Page 4-3," - en dash here please per MOS:DASH
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Murphy defeated Alfie Burden in the second round 4–3, before defeating Ben Woollaston and Dominic Dale 4–1." - repetition of "defeated"
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Yan defeated Higgins 5–2." - perhaps expand more on this short four-word sentence?
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "Wilson defeated O'Sullivan in the first semi-final on a deciding frame 6–5, whilst Murphy defeated Yan by the same scoreline" - same issue as above
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• The term century break can also be wikilinked
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "and made a second century break" - how many points did Murphy score during his second century break?
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "On the resumption," - On resumption of the match,
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "to win frame nine and won frame ten with a third century break" - repetition of "wo(i)n"
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• "This was Murphy's second championship of the season," - second championship victory of the season,
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Qualifying round

• The two flagicons should be replaced by the flagathlete templates as has been done in the main draw section
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

References

• References 5 to 7, 13 and 15 to 21 are missing their publication dates
• The titles for References 7 and 13 need updating
• The quote at the end of Reference 8 is unneeded
• References 16 and 21 are missing their respective authors
• The publisher of Reference 23 should be in the work= field
  • All covered. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Shall put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 08:41, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

• • All should now be covered MWright96 Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
    • @Lee Vilenski: Have made various changes to the refs for completion and deleted one duplicate source; am now promoting this article to GA status MWright96 (talk) 15:38, 10 July 2021 (UTC)