Talk:2021 Salvadoran political crisis

Latest comment: 3 years ago by FredModulars in topic GA Review

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GA Review

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Reviewer: FredModulars (talk · contribs) 13:00, 30 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

I'm more than happy to review this! I will be adding comments in the next few days. FredModulars (talk) 13:00, 30 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

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Good Article Status - Review Criteria

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  1. Well-written:
  2. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (prose) Well done Pass Pass
    (b) (MoS) See comments on lead Pass Pass
  3. Verifiable with no original research:
  4. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (references) Pass Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) Pass Pass
    (c) (original research) Pass Pass
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) Pass Pass
  5. Broad in its coverage:
  6. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (major aspects) Well done Pass Pass
    (b) (focused) Well done Pass Pass
  7. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
  8. Notes Result
    Pass Pass
  9. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
  10. Notes Result
    Nothing outstanding to warrant an "edit war" Pass Pass
  11. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
  12. Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) See comments Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) Would be nice to see more images in the article (such as non-free images here), but media seems adequate for now Pass Pass

Result

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Result Notes
Pass Pass

Discussion

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Comments (1 July)

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Criteria 1

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  • ~~The lead is good, but it would be nice to add a brief mention of the background of the incident. It's a little confusing to have the incident described without any context.~~
    • Added a brief mention at the end to tie in with the self-coup comments by the opposition.
  • ~~Please add a link to Attorney General of El Salvador in the lead.~~
    • Linked. Didn't even know that page existed.
  • ~~Comma in Territorial Control Plan, should come after the quotes. Is there even a need for the quotes?~~
    • Checked, and there shouldn't be quotes.
  • ~~The link to the 2020 Salvadoran protests should be "protests against Bukele", not "protests". It makes it seem that protests is being linked.~~
    • Fixed.

Critera 2–6

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I'll just make it clear I can't read Spanish and I don't want to take a chance with an online translator (I've seen bad mistakes in the past). I'll have to assume all content citing Spanish sources have what they claim to say. All sources look reliable, but I will have to go through them in order to fact-check what is in the article. FredModulars (talk) 11:14, 1 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

The article has significant coverage of the event, displays all points of view of the topic, and there is nothing substantial enough to say there's an edit dispute or war. Excellent job! I am not an expert on images, non-free images, and fair use, but from what I understand this article satisfies 6a.

The article seems to be in great shape. After the issues above are addressed, I will most likely be promoting the article. FredModulars (talk) 03:56, 2 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • All done! Thank you for reviewing this article. Apologies for the delay in my response as I was in El Salvador when this was nominated and wifi there for me is really only possible when I'm in San Salvador. Pizzaking13 (Hablame) 17:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
No worries! I remember seeing your comment on the GAN for the 2020 political crisis and acknowledged I'd have to wait a while. It's all good though, I'll be promoting this article since all outstanding changes have been addressed. Congratulations and great job on your work! FredModulars (talk) 18:40, 6 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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