Talk:2022 St. Louis Cardinals season

Latest comment: 2 years ago by 97.92.193.218 in topic Opening paragraph

Opening paragraph

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Hello. I have noticed that the first paragraph does not read very well. If you look at it, one of the sentences starts with and when it is unnecessary. It just overall it just doesn't feel smooth. Thanks! ~~ 97.92.193.218 (talk) 20:36, 13 August 2022 (UTC)Reply