Talk:2022 World Snooker Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:27, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

I'm surprised this has gone so long without anyone picking it up. I'll review it at some point over the next few days. Hog Farm _Talk 04:27, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• Thanks for picking this up! I look forward to your comments. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:26, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• "that no seeded player from a home nations country was aged under 30." - I think this needs some clarification. Is "home nations" a grouping of countries, or is it a reference to the hosting nation of a tournament?
• "Pagett was criticised after footage showed him not declaring a foul shot" - I think you need to link foul shot to the cuesports glossary
  • Linked Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:03, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
• " Murphy stated that Trump had "made far too many mistakes" and had "a horrific night in front of him" after the first day's play" - why is what Murphy said about Trump particularly significant to mention here? This sounds (to my American mind) like routine trash talk
  • Well, if it had been trash talk, that would have been very notable as we are talking about a sport where play in a full on suit and now tie and can get a fine for not having smart enough shoes. But, Murphy was acting as a pundit when he said that, basically reiterating that after the morning session Trump needed to play a lot better on the evening session. I have added a word or two to this effect Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:03, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
• "with Bulgarian referee Desislava Bozhilova officiating her first world semi-final." - is there not a better source for this than a tweet? If the tweeter is Brendan Moore (snooker referee) it would be okay for sourcing, but that seems like an odd source for that statement
  • That's the guy! Yeah, I'd prefer a better source, but it's not something that is usually commented on outside of finals. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:26, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
• Other sources look fine
• Images look fine

Placing on hold, shouldn't take much to get this good to go for GA. Hog Farm _Talk 01:49, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

• I've done a couple replies Hog Farm. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 11:03, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
  • My concerns have either been addressed or responded to. Passing. Hog Farm _Talk 15:38, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

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