Talk:2024 Rose Bowl/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 02:34, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 03:06, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Will review this! Comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 03:06, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

@PCN02WPS Here are my comments, made some minor copy-edits. Hope they can be addressed! Arconning (talk) 17:38, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

@Arconning Everything has been taken care of or responded to! PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:33, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

• Mentions of winningest should be replaced with something more formal.
  • Done, using the same language as the DYK hook. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• bowl games which concluded, replace which with that.
• The winner qualified through to the 2024 College Football Playoff, wondering if this should be ...for the 2024 College Football Playoff?
  • Done both. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Background

• No issues, nice work.

Teams

• regular season, wondering if this should be hyphenated?
  • No, "regular season" is a commonly used noun phrase in college football and is never hyphenated. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Game summary

• After two plays for no gain,, is this an American football term that should be wikilinked?
  • There really isn't a single applicable term for this, all I'm saying is that they did not gain or lose any yardage. I'll reword to make this clearer. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
• . Michigan took a knee to run the remaining seconds off of the clock and send the game to overtime., "took a knee", same with preceding comment
  • I linked quarterback kneel at the end of the paragraph about the second quarter but since it's worded differently here I linked it again. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
• Tables are formatted properly.

Aftermath

• Optional. I was wondering if the last could be merged somewhere?
  • Where would you suggest? PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
    • At a second check, this would be better like that lol.

Images

• All images are relevant to the article and have proper licensing.

Refs

• Earwig's okay.
• Random ref checks: 1, 14, 21, 24, 37, 43, good.
• I'd like to question the reliability of 29, Football Zebras. If it's reliable, it should probably use it's name rather than the website to follow consistency with the ref layout
  • I haven't had problems with the site in GANs past (see 2021 College Football Playoff National Championship, for example), so I believe it's good. Everything I've found on there has been backed up by other sources including official game statsheets, as well. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 22:32, 21 July 2024 (UTC)

Misc

• No ongoing edit war, broad and focused info, neutral.

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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