Talk:412th Test Wing

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Catrìona in topic Purple prose

Commander

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The citation given for the wing commander is to an Air Force Times article about a previous commander. --Lineagegeek (talk) 20:53, 28 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

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Purple prose

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Particularly this section:

The CTF military personnel, government civilians, and contractors all work together as a team. This concept enables a cheaper, faster, and more effective test program and produces a more effective aerospace system for the warfighter.[1]
Risk is an accepted component of flight testing, but because of Edwards' benchmark flight test safety processes, the center maintains a stellar safety record. The AFTC's mission focuses on Developmental Test and Evaluation which is the process used to identify risks that need to be reduced or eliminated before fielding new systems. Once DT&E is accomplished, aircraft systems transition to Initial Operational Test and Evaluation, or IOT&E where the aircraft is evaluated for combat effectiveness and suitability for an intended mission.[1]

Sadly I lack the expertise to rephrase this information in non purple terms — Catrìona (talk) 07:52, 4 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference 412TWFS was invoked but never defined (see the help page).