Talk:465th Bombardment Wing
Latest comment: 16 years ago by LordAmeth in topic Cleanup required
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Cleanup required
edit"Constituted as 465th Bombardment Group (Heavy) on 19 May 1943. Activated on 1 Aug 1943. Prepared for duty overseas with B-24's. Moved to the Mediterranean theater, Feb-Apr 1944..." and so on are not full sentences. The information presented here appears worthwhile and, for all I know, accurate, but it is not well presented. The entire article needs a once-over to convert it into proper English prose, with full sentences before every period (full stop). LordAmeth (talk) 13:49, 19 December 2007 (UTC)
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