Talk:500 Park Avenue/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Epicgenius in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
Basic stuff and comments
edit- "similarly to the" → "similar to the"
- "reaches to the curb" → "reaches the curb"
- Remove the comma after "from the 1980s".
- "nearly-full-height" → "nearly full-height"
- "different stories of building" → "different stories of the building"
- Remove the hyphen between "anodized-aluminum".
- "guiderails" should be two words.
- "soffit which extends" → "soffit that extends"
- "empty space" sounds weird. Both words basically mean the same thing.
- "partitioned hall was" → "partitioned hall were"
- "similar to in the" - reword.
- Remove the comma after "Great Depression".
- Remove the comma after "move to the Pepsi-Cola Building".
- "had a large amount of" → "had a number amount of"
- "through third floors" - reword.
- Wikilink articles for reporters from The New York Times.
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- Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 22:21, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
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