Talk:55 Wall Street/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:58, 28 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous  On hold

Comments

1.

• Link cruciform to Cruciform#Cruciform architectural plan
  •  Done
• "The original structure, with its dome, was the most[10]" - The most what?
  • Oops. I have fixed it. epicgenius (talk) 16:41, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
• " it is composed of the original three-story building and a four-story addition" - That's an odd way to phrase it, since that only adds up to seven stories
  • That was supposed to be 5 stories, so I fixed it. epicgenius (talk) 16:41, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
• Link Subtreasury at the first mention, not the second
  •  Done
• "Four years later, the New York City Landmarks Preservation Commission designated the building's exterior as one of the city's earliest official landmarks.[" - "the building" can be read as 399 Park instead of 55 Wall, because the previous several sentences are about 399 Park
  •  Fixed

2.

• NYCL nos. need citations
  •  Fixed
• The years of the listings are cited, but the exact dates are not.
  •  Fixed
• "55 Wall Street: A Working Landmark. Citibank. 1979." - Don't know that linking the URL is any helpful, because it says it is not available online for copyright reasons
  •  Removed
• For ref 1, is there a way to get the URL to the specific page instead of the search page?
  •  Done

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• Both external links are dead
  •  Removed
    • @Hog Farm: Thanks for the review. I have fixed all the issues. epicgenius (talk) 17:57, 29 May 2020 (UTC)