Talk:6B (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:28, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

OK, only a few hiccups:

• Intro: I would add which TV station the episode aired on
• Plot: Maybe explain who Fauxlivia and Walternate are (just a brief sentence)
• Production: I think 1st should be spelled out as first, and I think 'assistant director' should be de-capitalized
• Cultural: Can you elaborate on this a little more? Which critics? I've never seen the play, so I don't understand the references

• I'm afraid I don't understand the references either; they were added by another editor. I think they make sense however (or at least seem similar to other cultural references I've seen in other articles). I wouldn't want to remove them considering they're well sourced. Perhaps if you explained what specifically you don't understand, I may be able to do a little digging. Ruby 2010/2013 22:27, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

• Reviews: Comma after 'that' in "The A.V. Club's Noel Murray graded the episode a B-, explaining that"

Fix these small issues in seven days and I will pass the article!--Gen. Quon (talk) 17:19, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

I believe Masem and I have addressed (most of) your concerns. Thanks for the review! Ruby 2010/2013 22:27, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. I'll let the cultural thing slide too, since it is sourced. ;) Pass!--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:48, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks again for the review! Ruby 2010/2013 00:05, 2 March 2012 (UTC)