Talk:7 Summers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this straight away! --K. Peake 16:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Wouldn't soft rock be more appropriate than easy listening under genres in the infobox per the comp section?
• "and Josh Osborne and it" → "and Josh Osborne, and it" but write this out in the body in prose since everything in the lead has to be
• "on the album however following a demo version of the song" → "on the album however, following a demo version"
• "he decided to include it on the album." → "he decided on inclusion."
• Change to second single because otherwise it implies a different type
• Why is soft rock listed as an influence when the body sources it as a genre?
• "Wallen sings of a lost love of his and" → "Wallen sings of his lost love" also, the title suggestion is not directly sourced in the body
• "7 Summers received generally positive reviews" → ""7 Summers" received positive reviews" per the body
• Add a comma after music critics
• "Moi's production and the overall mood of the track." → "Moi's production, and its overall mood."
• Italicise Time and change 7th to seventh per MOS:NUM
• "The song debuted number one" → "The song debuted at number one" plus this needs to be written out in the body
• "after Garth Brooks (under the persona of Chris Gaines) did so in 1999." → "after Garth Brooks did so as Chris Gaines in 1999."
• Write the certification out in prose, also add sentences for the short film and the live performances

Background

• "what would become the songs" → "what would become the song's"
• "he announced the song would be released" → "he announced it would be released"
• Mention the writers and producers somewhere here
• "the full version"." → "the full version."" per MOS:QUOTE

Composition and lyrics

• "by soft rock bands such as" → "by soft rock bands such as the" on the img text with the wikilink
• "and bittersweet quality in the song that would" → "and bittersweet quality that would"
• "chords,[5] and layered guitars meant to give the song a maximalist element," → "chords,[5] layered guitars meant to add a maximalist element,"
• "groove" and a "breezy," → "groove", and a "breezy,"
• "are "nostalgic" "bittersweet" "wistful"" → "are "nostalgic", "bittersweet", "wistful","
• "from East Tennessee (Wallen)"" → "from East Tennessee", referring to himself."
• "indicating that a second chance with" → "indicating a second chance with"

Release and reception

• "on August 14, 2020 as" → "on August 14, 2020, as"
• This sentence is quite messy; italicise the album title, mention the release date separate for when it was released not the song and add the refs for all the info
• "Upon its release the song gained" → "Upon its release, the song was met with"
• "pack a gentle wallop"." → "pack a gentle wallop."" per MOS:QUOTE
• "Allie Clouse of The Knoxville News Sentinel deemed it" → "Allie Clouse of the Knoxville News Sentinel deemed the song"
• "would described the song as "having imagery" → "described the song as having "imagery"
• Remove the introduction to Moi
• Last para looks good!

Short film

• Img looks good!
• "with Wallen fearing that" → "while he fears that"
• "In the film after failing to make the big leagues Wallen" → "In the film, after failing to make the big leagues, Wallen"
• "to community college and by Wallen reminiscing" → "to community college, as well as by him reminiscing"
• "and the cinematic nature of the film." → "and its cinematic nature." but is three refs enough for this?
• "tease Wallen's upcoming second studio album (Dangerous: The Double Album), with Wallen stating" → "tease Dangerous: The Double Album, with him stating"
• "a January 8th, 2021 release," → "a January 8, 2021 release,"
• For the last para, [19][20] should only be invoked at the end

Commercial performance

• "on the Global Apple Music chart." → "on the global chart."
• "at number six on the" → "at number six on the US"
• The Voice part is not sourced
• "at #3 on the Rolling Stone Top 100," → "at number three on the Rolling Stone Top 100," with the pipe per MOS:LINK2SECT
• "Wallen's first single to" → "becoming Wallen's first single to"
• "driven by social media and" → "driven by TikTok and"
• The move country forward quote is not sourced and if you can, italicise the Los Angeles Times

The source/title describes Wallen as moving Country into the 21st century while primarily focusing on the song.

• [22] should solely be at the end of the first sentence

Live performance

• Retitle to Live performances
• "Wallen performed the song on Saturday Night Live to" → "Wallen performed the song on his Saturday Night Live debut to" per the source
• Either remove the "promote the album" part or add that he performed it along those other tracks
• "In his 2022, The Dangerous Tour, the song would typically be the 5th song" → "In his 2022 The Dangerous Tour, the song would typically be the fifth one" per MOS:NUM

Personnel

• Retitle to Credits and personnel
• Remove or replace Genius per WP:RSP (you are citing a lyrics page)
• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION and split the year-end tables

Certifications

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION

References

• Copyvio score looks somewhat high at 48.5%; cut down direct quoting to address this
• Remove amp from all URLs using it
• Music Mayhem → Music Mayhem Magazine on ref 2 and fix MOS:QWQ issues
• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 4 and 28
• Wikilink Los Angeles Times on ref 6
• Wikilink Taste of Country on ref 8 per MOS:LINK2SECT
• What exactly makes ref 9 a reliable source? If justified, fix MOS:QWQ issues.

Replaced Source

• WP:OVERLINK of Knoxville News Sentinel on ref 10
• CS → CountrySwag on ref 13
• Pipe Time to Time (magazine) on ref 14
• What exactly makes ref 16 a reliable source?

Holler Country is a fairly large digital Country Magazine that has a full editing team and regularly breaks news

• Ditto for ref 17, which I cannot access at the moment

I included this to support the song being considered one of his best. I can remove it you feel it is unreliable

• WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 21
• Cite last name followed by first and pipe Variety to Variety (magazine) on ref 24
• Wikilink TMZ on ref 25
• Fix MOS:QWQ and MOS:CAPS issues with ref 26
• Remove the author and GlobeNewswire News Room → GlobeNewswire on ref 27
• Wikilink The Hollywood Reporter on ref 29
• What exactly makes ref 30 a reliable source? If kept, cite The All-New 98.9 THE BULL as publisher instead and fix MOS:QWQ issues.

It's the radio station he did the performance on

• Remove or replace ref 31 since setlist.fm is not reliable

Done

• Remove or replace ref 32 per WP:RSP

Done

• WP:OVERLINK of Rolling Stone on ref 41

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; the sources are the main problem here. --K. Peake 20:01, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake I believe I have fixed everything, let me know if I missed anything. Newtothisedit (talk) 03:05, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, everything has been covered properly here! --K. Peake 07:19, 27 January 2023 (UTC)