Talk:A2LL
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editEdits include:
1. Delete 'solution', insert 'process'. 2. Delete 'because of', insert 'due to'. 4. Delete 'telecommunication', insert 'telecommunications'. 5. Change 'Company Systinel' to 'Systinel company'. 6. Change 'approx.' to 'approximately', as per MOS. 7. Delete 'Workers', insert 'Staff'. 8. Change typo 'hat' to 'had'. 9. Change 'booking system FINAS' to 'FINAS booking system'. 10. Delete 'wrong booking', insert 'mistakes'. 11. Change word order of 'street name was chosen to be too small'. 12. Typo 'banckruptcy'.
13. My favourite: 'In July 2005 it was discovered that the rules cannot cope with one-time payments, for example so that school children can purchase their school books, or for a new washing machine, so this feature was disabled entirely.'
What do schoolchlidren want with 'a new washing mashine'?
I have changed the wording.
Most of the other edits involve putting words into the past tense
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