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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- Hi! Let me know the comments! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 18:33, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
Nice article. Here are my comments:
- Lead:
- joint venture with AirAsia Berhad holding 49% of the airline, Tata Sons holding 40.06% and Telestra Tradeplace having the remaining 10% in the airline Better rephrase this as "joint venture with AirAsia Berhad holding 49% stake in the airline, Tata Sons holding 40.06% and Telestra Tradeplace holding the remaining 10%." Please check that the meaning is the same.
- What exactly is Telestra Tradeplace?
- Air Asia India commenced operations on 12 June 2014 with Bangalore as its primary hub. Would look better in first para.
- The company marked Tata's return to aviation industry after 60 years, having ceded Air India in 1946. Would look better in second para.
Thanks, Magentic Manifestations. Now, continuing with the rest of the article:
- History:
- foreign direct investment of up to 49% "in airlines"?
- with Tata sons "S"ons
- ₹1.25 (1.9¢ US)/available seat kilometer "/" would look better as "per". "Kilometre" as per BE.
- The introduction of AirAsia was expected to By whom?
- an amount of US$50 million Could be converted to INR. (stated originally in US$, so did not convert)
- rent/lease aircraft The slash could be better replaced by "or".
- AirAsia India was established on 28 March 2013. AirAsia is the first foreign airline to set up a subsidiary in India. Can be combined.
- as its secondary hub Remove "as".
- after IndiGo and SpiceJet with "SpiceJet, with"
- Corporate affairs:
- founder of AirAsia group announced "group, announced"
- airline, however the latter refused "airline; however, Tata refused"
- Somewhere you say "chairman", elsewhere "Chairman".
- chief adviser "advisor" (BE)
- Destinations:
- If each entry has a source then what is ref. 29 for?(think, no harm in additional reference from airline website.)
- Fleet:
- Link Airbus.
- import 10 A320-200 aircraft Would be better to say "ten" here.
- AirAsia India on 21 March 2015 "On 21 March 2015, AirAsia India"
- and the is registered as VT-APJ Error?
- Honor --> Honour (BE).
- Sources:
- In ref. 18, the publisher is Anna.aero.
I think that should be it. These addressed, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 04:26, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sainsf, done!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 07:35, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
- Very well, promoted. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 07:36, 30 April 2016 (UTC)