Talk:AJ's Infinite Summer

Latest comment: 9 years ago by BenLinus1214 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: BenLinus1214 (talk · contribs) 20:43, 17 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

Sorry this has been sitting here for so long. I'll get back to you in a few hours. BenLinus1214talk 20:43, 17 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

Comments

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Plot

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  • @23W: This is only an 8 1/2 minute pilot, yet the plot summary is about as long as that of a 21-minute episode. Is all this really necessary?
    • Reduced and rewritten. 23W
  • When writing plot synopses of animated series, is there some sort of guideline or policy (or even unwritten custom) of not listing the voice actors the first time a character is mentioned? This is actually a question--I dabble in The Simpsons articles, but I don't know do too much work on animated series.
    • There's no real guideline, but I listed them in the production section. Too many parenthesis looks weird IMO. 23W

Production

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  • Is there an image that would be relevant here?
    • Added (of the band). 23W
  • The pilot has some notable voice actors, yet you mention nothing of them. Are there any notes that can be found about their roles in the production of the pilot? Otherwise, just a sentence saying that they were in it would suffice.

Reception

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  • The image's caption would be a bit unclear to a casual reader who just looks at the caption, because just from that, it's unclear who "Lamb" is. I would specify, saying something like "John Lamb, a reporter for the Forum of Fargo-Moorhead…" Also, a link to Fargo South High School would be helpful.
    • Removed the image entirely; seems too irrelevant. 23W
  • The article leaves a question—why wasn't the pilot picked up? It seems like it was acclaimed and did fairly well--is there any information on this? A reader would probably be wondering this as well.
    • It could very well still be in development. Jones hasn't suggested otherwise on his blog IIRC. Cartoon Network is rather lenient with their pilots. I mean, the pilot for Uncle Grandpa was released in 2008 and green-lit in 2012, so it's anyone's guess. 23W

Break

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