Talk:AK vs AK/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by MSG17 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:53, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk?
- Thanks for stepping up! I hope I haven't caused any grief or bad blood, so to speak, because of our previous interaction. MSG17 (talk) 23:04, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- A reference is needed to verify that the film is 108 minutes.
- Done and fixed the runtime
- You can't cite Netflix. You need a reliable source.
- Rechecked the sources in the article... found one that mentioned the runtime (now stated at the old amount, strange), changed to that
- You can't cite Netflix. You need a reliable source.
- In the first paragraph, add a comma after Sonam Kapoor Ahuja.
- Done
- Link film-within-a-film.
- Done
- The claim that "Filming took place in December that year" seems misleading considering the note in #Production. I would reword it.
- Reworded
Plot and cast
edit- Since it's just trivial, remove the note after "documentary" in the first sentence.
- Yeah, I don't think its ideal either. Done
- Currently, the plot section is 754 words. Per WP:FILMPLOT, try to get it down to 700.
- Managed to get it down to exactly 700
- Remove the comma after "uninterested".'
- Done
- Remove the comma after "CCTV footage".
- Done
- The sentence "then would take a gun out from his bag and force Kapoor to kill either of themselves" is kinda confusing. Try rewording it.
- Reworded
- Add the cast listing template to #Cast.
- Never knew about this template... done
Production
edit- Are three references really needed after "his spokesperson"?
- Eliminated one frivolous reference, now it's just the initial report and a later refutation
- Is the quote after "early 2020, with Kapoor stating" necessary? Can it be changed to prose?
- I would think that, for something like this, it would be best to hear it from the horse's mouth. (It helps that this quote was featured on DYK, so I am rather partial to keeping it.)
- Thanks for the reason. Sounds good.
- "under-the-radar" → "under the radar"
- Done
- Link Twitter.
- Done
- In the note after "IAF officer", change "To be more specific" to "In the film".
- Done
Soundtrack
edit- "Weiting" → "Writing"
- Done
- NDTV and Bollywood Hungama should not be in italics.
- Done
Reception and analysis
edit- Link Bollywood Hungama.
- Its linked in the soundtrack section, so its not relinked to avoid repetition (same thing done with NDTV now).
- NDTV and Bollywood Hungama should not be in italics.
- Done
- Move the first reference after "messaging" to after "Indian cinema',"
- Done
- "..." → "[...]"
- Done
- Can "inside information on" be changed to just "inside information" or is it supposed to be part of the rest of the sentence it's in?
- Its supposed to be part of the rest of the sentence (inside information on the main actors and Bollywood in general).
- So can "information on and the reputations" be changed to "information on the reputations"?
- I don't see why not. Done
- So can "information on and the reputations" be changed to "information on the reputations"?
- Link the first use of Film Companion, not the second.
- According to MOS:DUPLINK, "
Citations stand alone in their usage, so there is no problem with repeating the same link in many citations within an article
".
- According to MOS:DUPLINK, "
- The first paragraph in this section has two uses of Film Companion. I was just saying to link the first one rather than the second one.
- Oh...; sorry, I misread that. Fixed
- The first paragraph in this section has two uses of Film Companion. I was just saying to link the first one rather than the second one.
- "intentionally[...]the" → "intentionally [...] the"
- Fixed
- "intentionally[...]" → "intentionally [...]"
- Done
References
edit- Archive all archivable sources (I recommend using this).
- I already ran through it with the bot beforehand... looks like it missed a few (and I added one), so I reran it. I'll manually added an archive for one that it missed later, as it is taking a while to generate in the Internet Archive.
- Try linking each website used in each reference.
- Done
- In the only reference citing it (currently #10), link Khaleej Times.
- Change the multiple links to Free Press Journal to The Free Press Journal.
- "Mashable India" → "Mashable India" ([[Mashable|Mashable India]])
- "Bollywood Hungama]." → "Bollywood Hungama"
- All done
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