Talk:A + No Poder

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Title

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If the Spanish title is an expression, rather than a formal thing, the English translation should be "To the Max". Yoninah (talk) 21:14, 10 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:19, 16 June 2016 (UTC)Reply


Infobox

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  • All good! :)

Lead

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Paragraph 1

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  • "("To the Max")" --> "(English: "To the Max")"
  • Please add the year (in parentheses) after Primera Fila (in this case, (2013))
  • "with original recordings," --> "with original songs,"

Paragraph 2

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  • ", with a critic expressing appreciation for the balance between ballads and rock songs." --> ", with one expressing appreciation for the balance between ballads and rock songs."
  • "To promote the album, two singles were released, "Adiós"" --> "To promote the album, two singles were released: "Adiós""

Background

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  • The first statement has two back–to–back "which"s; please reword the entire sentence
  • "Two years later, Guzmán entered the recording studio, after a five year absence, to record A + No Poder, with songs written by Guzmán and Argentinian musician José Luis Pagán.[3]" --> "Two years later, Guzmán entered the recording studio to record A + No Poder, which would become her first studio album in over five years. The album's songs were written by Guzmán and Argentinian musician José Luis Pagán.[3]"
  • "A + No Poder is Guzmán's first studio album since Único (2009), a "masterpiece" that was a commercial failure because the lack of promotion of the singer record label at the time, according to Ángel Rodríguez of ADN Informativo.[4]" --> "A + No Poder is Guzmán's first studio album since Único (2009), a critically acclaimed effort that was commercial unsuccessful due to lack of promotion, according to Ángel Rodríguez of ADN Informativo.[4]"

Content

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  • Please remove all of the English translations of the titles; they are unnecessary
  • "The album includes twelve tracks; eleven written by Guzmán and Pagán, with additional writers for the tracks "Adiós" ("Good-Bye") (Carlos Efrén Reyes), "Esta Noche" ("Tonight") (Karenka and Reyli Barba), and "A Más No Poder" ("To the Maximum") (Sarah Lenore).[5]" --> "The album includes twelve tracks: eleven written by Guzmán and Pagán, with additional writers for three of them. "Adiós" was co-written by Carlos Efrén Reyes, "Esta Noche" was co-written by Karenka and Reyli Barba, and "A Más No Poder" was co-written Sarah Lenore.[5]"
  • "Another track, "Una Canción de Amor" ("A Love Song"), was written by Argentinean singer-songwriter Alejandro Lerner.[5]" --> "Another track, "Una Canción de Amor" ("A Love Song"), was entirely written by Argentinean singer-songwriter Alejandro Lerner.[5]"

Reception

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Critical reception

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  • How was the album met with positive reviews? With music critics; add this and then link it to the article "Music journalism" please
  • "genre and experiment with..." --> "genre and experiment[ing] with..."
  • Rest is great

Commercial reception

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  • Flawless! Great work!

Singles

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  • "To promote the album, Guzmán released "Adiós" featuring Farruko on June 5, 2015.[10]" --> "To promote the album, Guzmán released two singles. Lead single "Adiós" was released on June 5, 2015 and features guest vocals from Farruko.[10]"

Track listing

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  • Excellent

Charts

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  • Also excellent!

End of GA Review:

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Great work Javier! ON HOLD for seven days to allow for changes to be made to the article! @PING me here with any questions, comments, or concerns! Again, thanks so much and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 03:12, 20 June 2016 (UTC).Reply

Thank you Carbrera, I did all the edits and also added info for a third single released after the GA nomination. @Carbrera:. Javier Espinoza (talk) 18:34, 20 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
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