Talk:A Benihana Christmas
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Creed on the mic
editWhat was Creed singing? Was it something he recorded? This would be a nice detail to add.
- I was wondering that exact thing. BabuBhatt 23:08, 15 December 2006 (UTC)
- seems like it - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_songs_featured_on_The_Office_%28US_TV_series%29#Episode_38:_.22A_Benihana_Christmas.22 —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 71.232.100.151 (talk) 06:40, 17 December 2006 (UTC).
Michael's call at the end
editWho was Michael talking to at the end of the episode? When he invited someone to Sandals? I was going to add to the episode summary something like, "Michael is finally able to persuade someone to go to Sandals with him, but their identity is not revealed."
- It purposely wasn't revealed. But I'm betting some female character that we didn't think much of at the time but will now become a love interest, like Jan and Carol were before they were brought back for romantic purposes... Or Todd Packer. -- Viewdrix 00:07, 16 December 2006 (UTC)
nog-a-sake?
edithey, is that a real cocktail? lol, sounds gross. maybe i'll try it this weekend though. haha —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 71.232.100.151 (talk) 18:53, 16 December 2006 (UTC).
Creed: Goof or no goof?
editAlthough it's true that cold opens do not always match the episode they introduce, everybody is wearing the same clothes they are wearing in the rest of the episode. When Creed arrives for work, Dwight is already at his desk. I vote goof. -- Raymondc0 16:26, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
Dunder Mifflin
editI am going through several articles and changing instances of "Dunder-Mifflin" to "Dunder Mifflin" (no hyphen) as it is the proper "spelling" of the company name (see Talk page at Dunder Mifflin). Just leaving a note to say that I've gone through this page. :) Fieryrogue 16:53, 24 May 2007 (UTC)
Cast Names
editJust pointing out that the actor/actress names are needed with the cast members. And the characters' full names are generally used. Look at Night Out if you need an example. Mastrchf (t/c) 22:40, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
- And on the reception section, I'd hesitate to use a block quote. Small little "blurbs" from 3 or 4 different sources usually works well. Mastrchf (t/c) 21:26, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
GA Review
editThis review is transcluded from Talk:A Benihana Christmas/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Well done.
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- The infobox seems out of place. Is it suppose to be like that? The article has a "red link", if it doesn't have an article, it would be best to un-link it, per here.
- Check. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:19, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
- The infobox seems out of place. Is it suppose to be like that? The article has a "red link", if it doesn't have an article, it would be best to un-link it, per here.
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
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- C. It contains no original research:
- Is TV.com a reliable source?
- Check. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 01:11, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
- Is TV.com a reliable source?
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
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- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
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- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
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- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
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- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
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- If the above statement can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article! Also, contact me if the above statements are answered.
- Pass or Fail:
-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 23:09, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
- As for the infobox, I'd say it should be changed to the one used in Night Out, Survivor Man, Branch Wars, etc. Mastrchf (t/c) 23:20, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
- TV.com is owned by CNET Networks, a trusted news source. RedThunder 00:03, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed the infobox --Mr.crabby (Talk) 00:13, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I have questioned the reliability of TV.com in several of the Office's episodes. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:19, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
- I would like to thank Red Thunder for being patient in this review, but it needs to be clear that I was just doing my job of making sure that the article met GA standards. With that being said, congratulations, you know have a GA in your midst. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 01:11, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
- Well, I have questioned the reliability of TV.com in several of the Office's episodes. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:19, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
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