Talk:A Certain Magical Index/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 16:02, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

I'll review this article.Tintor2 (talk) 16:02, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

The article looks pretty good but there is some stuff that I think needs to be revised.

Lead

• Can the ability of Toma be explored? Why is it so weird in the setting?
  • Done
• Based on the infobox, the light novels already ended so the final date could be added. If a sequel is still being published then it's also worth writing there.
  • Added

Infobox

• Since there are way too many forms of sequels and adaptations I suggest using the "collapsed infobox section begin" like in Code Geass or Darker than Blood to avoid conflict between the infobox and prose.
  • Collapsed

Plot is easy understand

Development

• I don't think the release subsection is needed based on the length.
  • I removed the subheading, although I do feel the information in it is worth stating in the article.

Video games

Arcade is too small. Think of the formal writing of an article like a formal letter when each paragraph is well balanced.

• • Combined with another section.

Critical reception

• Same as other sections. There is no need to make so many subsection with that content.
  • Same as above

@Link20XX: Other than that, the article is easy to understand. Revise this and I'll gladly pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 18:23, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

• @Tintor2: See above. Link20XX (talk) 21:11, 14 July 2021 (UTC)

Nice work. The article now feels easier to read especially with the infobox focusing on the first work.Tintor2 (talk) 22:23, 14 July 2021 (UTC)