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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 September 2020 and 7 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): EckstineAbi, Wikied56, Zoe L. Norman, Ravenclawforthewin, Nalcreate, Earthtoivy.

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This article has issues with redundancy and conciseness. Sentences are either too long or too short and often repeat A Radiant Curve multiple times. Some variation is needed to make the article more interesting and engaging while still maintaining an appropriate tone. — Preceding unsigned comment added by WorldlyBecket (talkcontribs) 21:17, 31 December 2020 (UTC)Reply