Talk:Abbas (photographer)

Latest comment: 7 months ago by Elroch in topic Unencyclopedic content needs replacing

Abbas Attar?

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I propose we change the title of this article to Abbas Attar, which is Abbas's full name. see: http://ndmagazine.net/photographer/abbas-attar/ and on http://pro.magnumphotos.com/C.aspx?VP3=CMS3&VF=MAGO31_10_VForm&ERID=24KL53B_Y#/CMS3&VF=MAGO31_10_VForm&ERID=24KL53B_Y&POPUPIID=2S5RYDWJDN9Y&POPUPPN=2 he is listed as A. Abbas. Barbicanf (talk) 16:14, 23 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Unencyclopedic content needs replacing

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The sentence: <<His book, In Whose Name? The Islamic World after 9/11 (Thames and Hudson 2009), is a seven years quest within 16 countries : opposed by governments who hunt them mercilessly, the jihadists lose many battles, but are they not winning the war to control the mind of the people, with the "creeping islamisation" of all Muslim societies?>> needs to be rewritten in a more encyclopedic way that moves to a detached voice for the second part, rather than sounding like an opinion of the writer. The exact basis of the assertion is not made clear - a quote from the book or referenced source would be appropriate instead. Elroch (talk) 12:47, 29 March 2024 (UTC)Reply