Talk:Abdollah Mirza Qajar/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Add alt text to the image in the infobox and the one in #Career.
  • done
• Remove the comma after "the kingdom".
  • done
• The first paragraph in #Early_life needs sources.
  • done
• Shouldn't sayyida be sayyid?
  • for women it used as Sayyida
• "one years old" → "one year old"
  • done
• Add serial commas after Abhar and Damghan.
  • done
• "for until 1819" → "until 1819"
  • done
• "his fathers order" → "his father's order"
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• "scottish soldier and traveller" → "Scottish soldier and traveler"
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• "in Zanjan 1821" → "in Zanjan in 1821"
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• User:Headbomb/unreliable finds the source from Maryam Thaqafi (sid.ir) as a predatory source which states: There is community consensus to deprecate the source. The source is considered generally unreliable, and use of the source is generally prohibited. This include a slew of predatory publishers and journals, propaganda, fake news, and other terrible sources of information. The source should only be used in exceptional circumstances, similar to blacklisted sources, but these circumstances are not as rare.
  • should i delete the source and the sentence "He was interested in Fortune-telling through Astrology and wrote few books on it."? Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:50, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

Yes, delete the reference, but I would try searching for a replacement before deleting that sentence. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 11:18, 15 July 2021 (UTC)