Talk:About a Girl (Sugababes song)/GA1

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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) 02:11, 29 January 2012 (UTC)

References number 50 and 51 are dead. However, there are not disambiguation links. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

They are not dead. I just viewed them. Till I Go Home (talk) 11:07, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

There was mash-up with the numbers. This and this are dead. And now I checked number 50 is also dead. — Tomica (talk) 11:17, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

Well I replaced the 2nd one, but I can't find a reliable source to replace 1st. Till I Go Home (talk) 11:28, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but you will have to remove the information then. — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

• No issues— Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• known by his stage name RedOne ---> better known by his stage name RedOne
• I can see that "About a Girl" is repeating a lot in the first paragraph. Try something like the song, the single. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• Critics were divided in their reviews for "About a Girl" ---> Music critics were divided in their reviews of "About a Girl. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• and also became a moderate success in Poland ---> ...and also achieved a moderate success in Poland — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• Where is Vasquez Rocks? I think you should add near Los Angeles.— Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• Why there is not information in the lead for the live performances? It should summarize the whole article. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Background and release

• produceers ---> producers — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• "About a Girl" was re-recorded to feature the vocals of new member Jade Ewen and the removal of the vocals by ex-member Buchanan for the release of Sweet 7 in 2010. ... It needs clarification. — Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• "About a Girl" was later digitally released on 8 November, 2009. Which version? The new right?— Tomica (talk) 18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
• Jay-Z's picture should be aligned to the right and also (pictured) is needed in the caption. — Tomica (talk) 13:00, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

 Done all addressed. Till I Go Home (talk)

Composition and lyrical interpretation

• while the song itself is composed in the key of F. ---> which F? Major, minor? — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
• although the middle eight has a "90s dance-inspired" feel to it ---> with its middle eight also containing some "90s dance-inspired" feel to it. — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
• link Girls Aloud — Tomica (talk) 12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

• and a terrific, 90s dance-inspired middle 8.". ---> Repeating of the middle 8 + spot the other mistake;) !— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

  OH HAHAHA. It took me like ten minutes to realise what you were talking about. Till I Go Home (talk)

• "Get Sexy" should be linked in composition and unlinked here. — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
• I also think there are some terms that have to be linked. — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
• Lady Gaga - linking — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
• Sweet 7 - repetition, change in the album or whatever. — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Chart Performance

• in the top 40 ---> in the charts Top 40— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Music video

• All in all looks good, just add Los Angeles when mentioning the Vasquez Rocks — Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

• Looks good.— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Other sections

• Also good look.— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

Release history

• The reference goes to the region where is released.— Tomica (talk) 12:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)

References

• 1. and all the other Digital Spy references, remove Digital Spy from the title
• 9. Not Discogs.com, just Discogs is fine, the same as other from this type
• 12. Needs space between Digital Spy and Hachette Filipacchi
• 13. Does Drowned in Sound has publisher?
• 15. Publisher is Rovi Corporation
• 16. Publisher is Independent Print Limited
• 37. work=Daily Mirror | publisher= Trinity Mirror
• 38. work=Daily Mail | publisher= Daily Mail and General Trust
• 43. Un-italicize BBC
• 45. Same as 38
• 47. work=The Sun | publisher= News International
• Some of the references don't have dates or accessdates. Please add it.
• 49. Billboard is work, and Prometheus Global Media is publisher

They need some work. Putting it now on hold. — Tomica (talk) 22:37, 13 February 2012 (UTC)

Aside from number 1, I fixed them all. Digital Spy includes the name in the title so no reason to remove. Till I Go Home (talk)

It looks awkward having the Digital Spy, two times in the references, but nevermind its your choice here. I am passing the article. Next time, this is well intentioned advice, work more on the references, before nominating the article, and of course keep the good work like now:D ! — Tomica (talk) 10:32, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

THANKYOU :P. Till I Go Home (talk)