Talk:Abrahams Creek/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will get to this in a few days. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 10:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• Any linking possible in the names of the major soils and rock formations?

• Done.

• What is "Mohican"?

• Linked for a second time.

• You may link the terms linked in the lead again in the main text.

• Done.

• At present, Abrahams Creek has no officially named tributaries As of when exactly?

• As of now.

• Even then we should say "as of 2016". Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 13:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• But that makes it sound like it is subject to frequent change, which it really isn't. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 15:43, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

• A note on what "impaired" means here? it is not considered by the Pennsylvania Department of Environmental Protection to be impaired

• Should be apparent to anyone who knows what the word "impaired" means. It's not a rare word.

• I mean a note on "impaired water body". I recall discussing it in one of our earlier reviews. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 13:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• I know, we did talk about it, but I've had second thoughts since then. As I said, anyone who knows what impaired means should get the gist. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 15:43, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

• Use convert templates for "cubic feet per second" and "milligrams per liter"?

• Done.

• Can "sediment" be linked in the lead as well?

• Done.

• "Mouth" is linked way too late.

• It's linked in the infobox.

• Then let us remove this late link. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 13:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• I thought you said it was fine to have repeat the link once in the body? --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 15:43, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

• Sure but please link it at first mention in the main text, under Course. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:36, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

• @Sainsf: Done. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 11:45, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

• Are "pond" and "flooding" not too common to be linked?

• It's an edge case really, but removed.

• Abrahams Creek Watershed Assessment and Project Prioritization Is this a report or a book? State this clearly.

• It's the reference, and I don't particularly think it needs to be stated.

Thanks for your cooperation. I believe the article meets the GA criteria now. Pleased to promote this. Great job! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 07:21, 4 April 2016 (UTC)