Talk:Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani

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The "Book of Songs" link points to the Chinese book rather than the Kitab al-Aghani. Recommend making both the English and Arabic transliteration point to the same location, namely http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kitab_al-Aghani.

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See https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/WikiJournal_of_Humanities/Ab%C5%AB_al-Faraj_%CA%BFAl%C4%AB_b._al-%E1%B8%A4usayn_al-I%E1%B9%A3fah%C4%81n%C4%AB,_the_Author_of_the_Kit%C4%81b_al-Agh%C4%81n%C4%AB --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:35, 30 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Piotrus and Eystein Thanisch: I'm about to start using the content at that page for expanding this article. I'd absolutely appreciate any editors assistance or feedback! T.Shafee(Evo&Evo)talk 06:30, 25 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
Feel free to ping me for any assitance or review. Good luck! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:51, 25 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Piotrus and Eystein Thanisch: I've integrated in most of the information from doi:10.15347/wjh/2020.001. A few aspects I'm uncertain of WP:MOS for:
  • What's most common practice with CE/AH dates? Is it reasonable to use both throughout or should one or the other be chosen?
  • The dates section contains some pretty important information on how certain the dates involved are, however jumping into it as the first section seems intense from a WP section ordering point of view. Any ideas for better placement? Should it be a section lower down, it seems a bit long for a footnote (I've trimmed it significantly from the original source).
  • It it worth simplifying sentences like "Based on al-Iṣfahānī’s references in the Kitāb al-Aghānī (hereafter, the Aghānī), Aḥmad b. al-Ḥaytham seems to have led a privileged life in Sāmarrāʾ, while his sons were well-connected with the elite of the ʿAbbāsid capital at that time." to "Aḥmad b. al-Ḥaytham likely led a privileged life in Sāmarrāʾ, while his sons were well-connected with the elite of the ʿAbbāsid capital at that time.[reference]"?
Thanks in advance for any assistance. (@AhmadLX and SlimVirgin: also pinging people who I'd previously discussed this article with in the context of footnote formatting in case it's of interest) T.Shafee(Evo&Evo)talk 03:50, 26 September 2020 (UTC)Reply