Talk:Academic freedom in the Middle East

Latest comment: 1 year ago by 37.60.74.112 in topic Israel section

Other countries?

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Why are there not sections for all the other countries in the ME? Oathed (talk) 06:52, 30 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Because nobody has written them yet, that's all. Wikipedia is a work in a progress. Zerotalk 09:03, 30 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Israel section

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The first paragraph of this section is riddled with so many grammatical and syntactical errors and problems that it is completely incoherent. It also lacks referencing or sources. Being familiar with the political developments it refers to - or which I assume it is referring to - I have some idea of what the writer is trying to convey. However, I still would have no idea how to rewrite it. It combines and conflates various issues that ought to have their own paragraphs or even sections. IMO it would best be removed as its problems are so glaring, and it cheapens a Wikipedia entry on what is an important and sensitive topic.

The next few paragraphs also contain errors of fact, as well as assumptions, conflations, and other problems, and it is not clearly demonstrated how they relate to the topic in question. 37.60.74.112 (talk) 11:21, 13 June 2023 (UTC)Reply