Talk:Action of 15 November 1810/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Jackyd101 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:58, 17 February 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:58, 17 February 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • One dab of broadsides needs to be fixed.
  • The rising tide during 16 November This is awkward; perhaps "The rising tide successfully refloated both ships the next day, however,..."
  • Otherwise nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:31, 18 February 2015 (UTC)Reply


Both done, thanks very much!--Jackyd101 (talk) 13:05, 18 February 2015 (UTC)Reply