Talk:Adore You (Harry Styles song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 19:53, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

Hey Ashleyyoursmile, I'm going to start my review now. LOVI33 19:53, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33, Thanks! --Ashleyyoursmile! 20:54, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

• Only the recording studios belong in the infobox, so make sure remove Sterling Sound and Eastwest
• RAK Studios → RAK, per Template:Infobox song
• London, England → London, UK
• Remove wikilink for Harry Styles under songwriters, WP:OVERLINK

 Done --Ashleyyoursmile! 07:55, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Background and composition

• chord progression of Cm–Eb–Ab–Bb → chord progression of Cm–E♭–A♭–B♭, using Template:Music
• wikilink "Watermelon Sugar"
• ’70s → '70s, plus wikilink it to 1970s in music  Not done since its already wikilinked in the first paragraph of Composition section
  • My Bad, do not see that. LOVI33 13:12, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

 Done everything else. --Ashleyyoursmile! 07:57, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Release and promotion

• he performed the song on Capital FM's 2019 Jingle Bell Ball → he performed the song at Capital FM's 2019 Jingle Bell Ball

 Done --Ashleyyoursmile! 07:58, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

• italicize Entertainment.ie  Done--Ashleyyoursmile! 07:58, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• and number eight on the Wallonia region of Belgium → and number eight in the Wallonia region of Belgium
• at number 14 on the week of 22 December 2019 → at number 14 in the week of 22 December 2019
• on the week of 12 January → in the week of 12 January 2020.
• In its 15th week broke into the top ten at number seven → In its 15th week, it broke into the top ten at number seven
• un-italicize Hot AC

 Done --Ashleyyoursmile! 07:59, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Music video

Background

• three Scottish locations- → three Scottish locations:
• wikilink UTC to Coordinated Universal Time

 Done --Ashleyyoursmile! 07:59, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Synopsis

• "resting fish face" → "resting fish [faces]"

 Done --Ashleyyoursmile! 07:59, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Reception

• No problems found, Great writing!

Credits and personnel

• No problems found.

Charts

• Looks Good!

Certifications

• Looks Good!

Release history

• Looks Good!

References

• ref 8, unlink Rolling Stone  Done --Ashleyyoursmile! 08:00, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold for now, this 100% passes all the GA requirements like I filled out above, just some technical fixes, then we can get it to GA in no time! As I said before, amazing writing, no doubt this will be GA. LOVI33 21:51, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33, Thank you very much for this review! I have addressed all comments. --Ashleyyoursmile! 08:02, 23 June 2020 (UTC)

Ok Ashleyyoursmile, thats a pass! Y

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