Talk:African Auxiliary Pioneer Corps
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Catlemur in topic GA Review
African Auxiliary Pioneer Corps has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 27, 2020. (Reviewed version). |
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editCheeky little ce, blammed a few typos, tidied prose, added oclc or issn to references, auto ed etc. Nice piece of work.Keith-264 (talk) 11:38, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:36, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
Criteria
edit1. Prose ✓ Pass
2. Verifiability ✓ Pass
3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass
4. Neutral ✓ Pass
5. Stable ✓ Pass
6. Illustrations ✓ Pass
7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass
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- "was a unit of the British army" - Should British Army be capitalized?
- "Allied war effort" - link Allied to Allies of World War II
- You link shillings, but not pence. Is there a specific reason for this?
- "Building railroads from Beirut to Haifa, tunneling, loading ammunition onto trains, guarding supplies and working as cooks." - Sentence fragment
- "5 APC servicemen were killed" - MOS:NUMERALS
- "2 MBEs, 7 Military Medals, 8 British Empire Medals" - MOS:NUMERALS
- Lead could use a little expansion.
- Lede expanded.--Catlemur (talk) 22:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
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- Is photography really the best way to describe the paintings of the AAPC activities? Looks like they'd be licensed public domain as a painting, too, but it seems like a description of a painting would be better than a description of a photograph.
- Added "A painting of" to the description of paintings within the article. Would that suffice?--Catlemur (talk) 21:54, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Catlemur: - Sorry, I wasn't very clear. I was referring to the licensing information on Commons. Hog Farm (talk) 02:49, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: I removed all the paintings, perhaps I will sort the licensing some other day.--Catlemur (talk) 07:35, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
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Good work. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 21:28, 26 May 2020 (UTC)