Talk:Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. season 3/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:51, 16 August 2016 (UTC)

• Grabbing for a review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 10:51, 16 August 2016 (UTC)

• Ok, let's get this underway.

• Lead: To make the opening of the second paragraph even less repetitive than the opening of the first, I'd change "A third season of Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. was ordered in May 2015" to "This season of Agents..."
• "to the next April" I suggest "following" as a replacement for "next", it's just a more typical turn of phrase for that sort of thing
• Link "fourth season" through to Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D. (season 4)
• Writing: You mention that Inhumans film as if it was extant, but it's now been cancelled. I wouldn't say to add too much, but could you add something to the bracketed text akin to "the once-planned film" or "the now cancelled film" or similar?
• Casting: Is it worth mentioning that Carl Creel is the Absorbing Man from the comics?
• Notes: You've got a third party citation tag there.

• Seeing that Most Wanted link made me take a look at the article, and it's getting close to being GA ready. I slightly hope that they might do a Meagerie-type job on it and somehow work the filmed footage from the pilot into a later AoS episode as flashbacks. At least then we'd get to see some of it. Shame really, I do enjoy the Palicki/Blood dynamic. Anyway, back to this article - a solid job, with not a lot of fixes before I'm very happy to see it as a GA. Placing on hold. Miyagawa (talk) 09:08, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

• The Inhumans film is still apparently happening, just not in Phase Three, so I've clarified that for now it is just a planned film. Carl Creel links to the Absorbing Man page, but he is never actually referred to as such in the series which is why we haven't listed him as such. And yes, hopefully we at least get to see Most Wanted at some point (I thought including it as an extra with this season's [eventual] home media release would be cool). - adamstom97 (talk) 10:38, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

• All good enough for me. Glad to hear that Inhumans film is still going ahead. The idea of Vin Diesel playing Black Bolt still appeals to me on the basis that he'll play the voice of one character and the body of another! Anyway, I'm getting off track. Happy to promote this to GA now. Miyagawa (talk) 14:13, 19 August 2016 (UTC)

• Thanks Miyagawa, and I totally agree about Vin :) adamstom97 (talk) 14:21, 19 August 2016 (UTC)