Talk:Agreement on Friendship and Cooperation between Bosnia and Herzegovina and Croatia/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 21:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC) Review should proceed in a few days, possibly sooner. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC)

Lead

Excellent here.

Infobox

Fine.

Preparation for war

"Bosniaks were also armed." By whom? The then informal-ARBiH?
No other issues in this section.

Clarified that it was the Croatian government. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 01:39, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Pressure and agreement

"Tuđman's Croatian Democratic Union (HDZ) party held important positions in the Bosnian government including the premiership and the ministry of defence, but despite this carried out a separate policy and refused for the HVO to be integrated into ARBiH." Separate reference please.

• Done. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 01:39, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

"According to Stjepan Kljuić: "we [HDZ BiH] were the same party divided into two factions and between two states." Capital W, please.
The rest is fine.

• Done. --◅ PRODUCER (TALK) 01:39, 24 May 2013 (UTC)

Aftermath

This section fine.

Conclusion

Excellent article! It is fantastic. Interesting bit of Balkan history. When the pending issues are addressed, I will pass the article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:27, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

• The links in refs 13 and 38 don't work. --99of9 (talk) 13:44, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

They reference encyclicals. This passes, sorry for being so late. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:58, 9 June 2013 (UTC)