Talk:Aimé Mpane/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: APK (talk · contribs) 02:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

@APK Here are my comments. Hope they can be addressed. :) Arconning (talk) 16:19, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

@Arconning: Thanks for the review! APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

Lead

• did not go far enough., go far enough? Could probably reword this^^
• A second sculpture was added and,, add another comma after added.
• restore, not repair, , add quotes.

 Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Early life

• Aimé Mpane was born in 1968 in the modern-day, remove the.
• after the Congo Crisis had ended,, remove comma.
• cabinet-maker and sculptor, replace cabinet-maker with cabinetmaker or cabinet maker. Also add a comma at the end.
• taught the Congolese, taught that the Congolese.
• Institut Des Beaux Arts, Institut des Beaux-Arts and add a comma at the end.
• In 1994, Mpane moved to Belgium , add a comma at the end.
• his first award, , remove comma.
• portrayed as a savage people, remove a.

 Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Career

• Congo Free State, and the way racism has played a large role in it., remove comma and replace it with them.

 Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

2000s

• Wikilink first mention of Kinshasa.
• and was featured, and were featured.

 Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

2010s

• in the Kinshasa, remove the.
• Nike swoosh, replace with Nike Swoosh and just wikilink the entirety to the Swoosh.
• 1897 Brussels International Exposition, add a comma at the end.
• he thought Congolese should be involved in the process., he thought Congolese people should be involved in the process..
• not looking towards the past, but the Congolese looking up, towards a brighter future. , for everyone to reconcile the past instead of fighting over it., restoration rather than a repair, add quotes.

 Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

2020s

• No issues from me.

Images

• Images have proper licenses, art works have fair use licenses which makes sense.

Refs

• Random refs check: 7, 16, 23. Yep good.
• Earwig picks up "violation unlikely"!
• Manual check seems great.

Misc.

• No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information about the topic.

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed