Talk:Air Combat/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "Air Combat[a] is..." never keen on such an intrusive footnote, could you say "Air Combat (also known as Ace Combat in Japan)[A]..."?
  • Per WP:VG/JP, the Japanese name should be kept as a footnote, unless it's written in kanji and therefore requires explanation (which this one doesn't).
• "in the country of Usea" -> "in the fictional country of Usea"
  • Corrected
• "fightercraft"' say what? Do you mean an "aircraft" or a "fighter aircraft"" or a "fighter"?
  • I've seen "fightercraft" be used before, but I changed it to "aircraft".
• "arcade hardware" no need for "arcade".
  • Removed
• "shipped 2.23 million copies" worldwide I presume.
  • Yeah, worldwide sales. Noted.
• Shouldn't the release date for mobile phone (2005) be reflected in the infobox?
  • I've never really been a fan of listing multiple release dates for a game in a single infobox, since more often than not it gets cluttered. I chose to just keep the PlayStation version's release date since that is the original version of the game.
• No reason for "n.a." in fields in the fair use image licensing, that needs to be remedied.
• "the country of Usea" again, add "fictional".
  • Done
• "and stealth aircraft" why not say which one?
  • Removed pipelink
• "powered System 21 arcade" link System 21.
  • Done
• Link "port".
  • Done
• "allow ... allow" repetitive.
  • Removed second instance
• "in Japan on June 30, 1995.[9] It was released " -> in Japan on June 30, 1995, and on September 9 in the United States as...
  • I actually disagree with this idea. I've chosen to specify it was titled Ace Combat in Japan in the first sentence, and I think the second sentence leading into the American and European dates is fine.
• "on August 25, 2005 for" comma after 2005.
  • Done
• "did Allgame's " AllGame.
  • Done
• "console.[19][16]" order.
  • Done
• "cutscenes,[19][16] realistic sound effects,[14][17][13][19] and amount" similar, twice.
  • Done
• Ref 14 should have spaced en-dash, not spaced hyphen in the tite.
  • Added

That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:03, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

• The Rambling Man: That should be it. Thanks for reviewing. Namcokid47 00:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Namcokid47 the fair use rationale is still complete for the screenshot. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

The Rambling Man: Done. Namcokid47 15:11, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Good stuff, promoting now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)