Talk:Aishwarya Rai Bachchan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:36, 9 April 2011 (UTC)

• I apologize. I am not going to review this until the weekend. I am doing my taxes.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:21, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
• Please add one paragraph to the WP:LEAD that summarizes the article after the filmography text.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:21, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Early life

• Several facts need dates. Do we know what dates
  1. She attended Arya Vidya Mandir
  2. She attended Jai Hind College
  3. She attended Ruparel College
  4. She gave up architecture
  5. She began modelling

Miss World

• Please address the citation needed tag.
• Other facts also need citations.

Early career (1997–98)

• "was also panned by critics." needs a citation.

Success (1999–2002)

• "The film became her first box office success in Bollywood and earned her her first Filmfare Best Actress Award." needs a citation.
• Link Catholic.
• 3rd para has no citations

Setback (2003–05)

• 3rd para has no citations

I apologize, but the article is missing too many citations for a more serious review. Please take the time to add inline citations to all worthwhile facts. I am quickfailing the article at this time without further review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:24, 17 April 2011 (UTC)