Talk:Akinetic mutism
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anterior artery occlusion
editProposing that anterior artery occlusion be included as a reason for its cause. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AriaNo11 (talk • contribs) 20:59, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
updates
editI wanted to inform you I've been doing extensive research and talking to professionals in order to update this page. I find akinetic mutism extremely interesting, and I am currently in a neuroscience class where part of our assignment is to update a neuroscience stub. I'll be adding information over the next few weeks. Please let me know if you have any suggestions or feedback to my additions. Thanks! Crowen4 (talk) 18:49, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
- I went in and added all of the content I have been researching. I kept the original content of the page, but rearranged it to fit in with the rest of the page. Please let me know of any suggestions or feedback! Thanks! Crowen4 (talk) 23:13, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
| | This article was the subject of an educational assignment in 2013 Q3. Further details were available on the "Education Program:Georgia Institute of Technology/Introduction to Neuroscience (Fall 2013)" page, which is now unavailable on the wiki. |
Wiki Article Critique (Applies to Last Version before November 19)
edit1. Quality of Information: 2
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also very respectful of previous work
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included actual case studies _______________
Total: 20 out of 20
Ana Minchew (talk) 18:55, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
1. Quality of Information: 1 (I thought the page required a little bit more encyclopedic information)
2. Article size: 2
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Total: 19 out of 20
I found the case studies to be really interesting. I think its needs a little bit more encyclopedic info. and some fine tuning. For example, the treatment intro paragraph is talking more about diagnosis than the treatment. Since diagnosis is different from treatment, having those separate would be clearer. Overall really good.
Wiki Article Critique By Tuan Nguyen
edit1. Quality of Information: 1
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10. Outstanding?: 1
Total = 18/20
I would like to see a bit more information in each subsection and if you can , cite some red link too, other than that, this page is great. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tnguyen306 (talk • contribs) 14:20, 25 November 2013 (UTC)