Talk:Al-Rahba/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- Some dablinks need to be fixed. [1]
- No copyvio detected
- Rahbat Malik ibn Tawk
- Wikilink Bedouin
- with the arrival in 942 of I think "in 942 with the arrival of" reads better
- Al-Basisiri's revolt ultimately failed I think you mean "Al-Basasiri"?
- Architecture
- The citadel of al-Rahba is described by Bylinski You need to introduce Bylinski to the reader.
- Thanks for taking this nomination Sainsf. I fixed the issues above. --Al Ameer (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- Happy to promote this. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:33, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking this nomination Sainsf. I fixed the issues above. --Al Ameer (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2016 (UTC)