Talk:Al-Rahba/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply


Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 20 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

General
  • Some dablinks need to be fixed. [1]
  • No copyvio detected
Rahbat Malik ibn Tawk
  • Wikilink Bedouin
  • with the arrival in 942 of I think "in 942 with the arrival of" reads better
  • Al-Basisiri's revolt ultimately failed I think you mean "Al-Basasiri"?
Architecture
  • The citadel of al-Rahba is described by Bylinski You need to introduce Bylinski to the reader.
Thanks for taking this nomination Sainsf. I fixed the issues above. --Al Ameer (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2016 (UTC)Reply
Happy to promote this. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:33, 21 June 2016 (UTC)Reply