Talk:Albert Pike Memorial/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:56, 6 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 09:56, 6 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • In lead:
  • thousands of Masons Can "Mason" be linked properly?
  • eighteen Civil War Can we say "18" so that it looks less wordy? WP:MOSNUM also recommends this.
  Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • In Background:
  • Albert Pike (1809–1891) Can these years be added in the lead as well?
  • Can "brigadier general" be linked?
  • Gaetano Trentanove (1858–1937) Do we need the years here?
  Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • Who is Fonderia Galli?
  • In Dedication:
  • 2pm Say 2 P.M.
  • The quotes would be more attractive if we use quote templates
  Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • In Reception:
  • There is not a jot of reliable proof You mean "lot"?
  • In Design and location:
  • Duplicate links: Morals and Dogma of the Ancient and Accepted Scottish Rite of Freemasonry, Scottish Rite
  • Can granite be linked?
  Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

That should be it. These done, I would be happy to promote this beautiful article. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thank so much for taking the time to review the article. I appreciate it! APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the fast reply. I believe this article is ready for promotion now. Such an awesome work, I am glad to pass this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:35, 8 April 2016 (UTC)Reply
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