Talk:Ali Abu Nuwar

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

No copyvio/dablink/external link issues. Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

Lead
  • Mind adding the name of the memoirs?
  • Maybe wikilink blood cancer?
Military career
  • Wikilink "Emir"
  • As ADC, Abu Nuwar was a major influence over then-20 year old Hussein Anything more on this?
  • The prose is excellent, I can not find any flaws that need to be corrected.
Later career
  • What is the Eisenhower Doctrine?

Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)Reply