Ali Abu Nuwar has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 27, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
A fact from Ali Abu Nuwar appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 April 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ali Abu Nuwar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
No copyvio/dablink/external link issues. Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
- Lead
- Mind adding the name of the memoirs?
- Maybe wikilink blood cancer?
- Military career
- Wikilink "Emir"
- As ADC, Abu Nuwar was a major influence over then-20 year old Hussein Anything more on this?
- The prose is excellent, I can not find any flaws that need to be corrected.
- Later career
- What is the Eisenhower Doctrine?
- Hey Sainsf, appreciate the review. I think I've addressed your concerns now. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:43, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:19, 27 June 2016 (UTC)