Talk:Aliko Dangote/Archives/2012


Biography assessment rating comment

The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- KGV (Talk) 05:58, 4 June 2007 (UTC)


To the person(s) responsible for the Dangote article, I would suggest at least modicum of objectivity. The last two sentences ought to be stricken from the article. First, comparative statements based on a person's character are widely avoided in responsible journalism and non-partisan writing. Secondly, ending the article with such a debatable, unfounded and unsupported claim such as an assertation of wealth is highly advised against. Please provide a link to a source corroborating your claim, as is made in the case of Robert Johnson of Black Entertainment Television. Thank you

Neutrality

Most of the writing in this article is from a promotional standpoint Mbgreetham —The preceding unsigned comment was added by (talkcontribs) 11:08, 17 April 2007 (UTC).