Talk:All India Kashmiri Samaj
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ambar wiki in topic Comment
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edit- "Main objectives" section needs sourcing.
- You use the word "fighting", which seems to be inappropriate unless they have actually been engaged in warfare/terrorism/riots on a significant scale - perhaps replace with "campaigning"?
- A wikilink is screwed up
- External links goes at the end (although in this instance it is dead anyway)
- Please read WP:OVERLINK yet again
- Please read WP:MOSHEAD. You do not need to say "of the AIKS" in headings
- "proving timely and adequate relief " - I think that you mean "providing" but in any event this is your WP:POV rather than what the source says. And the source is pretty poor
- Are you sure that it is not "All-India"
- The first mention of "All India Kashmiri Samaj" (ie:the opening sentence) should be bolded per WP:MOS - Sitush (talk) 08:36, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Comments were of much help and let me get to improving it before I submit it. My question is about its notability. Agree that some sources aren't top quality but believe that can be used in the article. -Ambar (talk) 10:10, 29 December 2012 (UTC)