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The section "sculpture" is somewhat problematic as it contains descriptions of images that in the meantime have been removed from the article or deleted. "Notice the hands ...", "in this sculpture, notice the hips" etc. are wordings that are not very helpful to the reader if he cannot see the corresponding images. --Proofreader (talk) 18:52, 24 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Please add a list of related literature if it is possible — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.37.144.146 (talk) 19:16, 5 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

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@Johnbod: the lead is large and contains material on background, which is not in body of article, so that needs moving and lead needs to be summary of sections. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:28, 22 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

Not really - the rest of the pretty crap article needs to catch up with the lead. Now expanded Johnbod (talk) 16:58, 25 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

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This topic is in need of citations and images that are being referred to under the Sculpture sub-topic. Please improve this article!
  • IMPROVE: No sources are cited, the text is obviously plagiarism from another source which uses images not present in this article, and the language used is unclear. (UTC)rscarbonneau

I am researching the topic of Amarna art, and I was thinking about using these websites as references. [1] [2] [3]

Nquave (talk) 03:58, 29 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

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  1. ^ Spence, Dr. Kate. "Akhenaten and the Amarna Period". bbc.co.uk. Retrieved 27 September 2015.
  2. ^ Hill, Jenny. "Egypt Society: Amarna Art". ancientegyptonline.co.uk. Retrieved 27 September 2015.
  3. ^ The Editors of Encyclopedia Britannica. "Amarna Style". britannica.com. Retrieved 27 September 2015. {{cite web}}: |last1= has generic name (help)