Talk:Amazing (Inna song)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 01:19, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• Grabbing this for a review. I will get to it later in the week as I am a little burnt out on reviews at the moment, but ping me if I do not get to this by next Sunday. Aoba47 (talk) 01:19, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead and inbox

• For this part “with Spanish guitar and beats”, you need a “a” in front of “Spanish”.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• This sentence (One reviewer regarded the song as being similar to Inna's past work, however, with the addition of new elements.) is rather vague; could you either clarify how it was similar to her past work or what are the new elements that the critic identified as part of the song?

 Not done See my comment in "Background and composition". Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• For this sentence (Other music critics gave positive reviews of the single, who praised its construction and foresaw its commercial success.), I would change “who praised” to “and praised”.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• For this part (and MAD Video Music Awards.), add a “the” before “MAD”.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Background and composition

• Add a “a” in front of Spanish guitar in both the paragraph and the audio sample caption.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• Did the editor from Divercity Cafe specify what these “new elements” were?

 Not done The user sadly doesn't specify what "new elements" he noticed. You can translate the ref for yourself if you want to. Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• Any sources mention the lyrics of the song?

 Not done No, sadly. Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Reception and accolades

• You can remove “failing to win”. It is generally assumed if you say something was nominated for something when the award ceremony has already passed that it did not win the award.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• I am not sure that this sentence ("Amazing" experienced widespread commercial success on record charts.) is necessary. It seems rather a stretch to say it experienced “widespread commercial success” and you should just let the sentences about the actual charts doing the talking for you. I would remove this sentence completely.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Controversy

• Add ALT text for the image

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• You can paraphrase the “stealing” quote.

 Not done I really don't know any other word here to fit the context ("copying" wouldn't fit!). Can you help me? Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• Add the year in which “Se Thelo” was released.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Music video

• I do no thin that surfboard, wetsuit, or swimsuit need links as they pretty universal topics.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Live performances and other usage

• I am never a fan of the phrase “homosexual kiss” just get rid of “homosexual” and keep “a kiss between two male background dancers”.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• I would separate the first sentence of the paragraph into a two sentences as the long list of events is rather unreadable.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• For this part (while she accidentally exposed one of her), I would use “and” instead of “while”.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• I believe that this section is required for all articles on songs.

 Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Final thoughts

• Once all of my comments are addressed, I will pass this as a GA. Good work with this. If possible, I would greatly appreciate it if you could pick up one of my GANs for review. Either way, have a great day Aoba47 (talk) 14:28, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• @Aoba47: I'm glad you "reached" this review earlier; I have responded to all your comments! I will also get to your GANs later this week, if I have more time (school began this week ;))... Oh yes, I noticed you write "good day or night" in your commets to me, so I just wanted to clarify that here in Germany, we have night when you there, in the US, have day . Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:08, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

• Thank you for the responses. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 20:09, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

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