Talk:American Horror Story/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 18:58, 19 April 2012 (UTC)

There's no reason this should still need a review so I'll give it a shot. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 18:58, 19 April 2012 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• There's quite a few disambiguation pages that need fixing: see here.
• What's confusing to me is that season 1 and season 2 read pretty much opposite. Season 1's just a plot summary while season 2's just about the cast and modifications. I understand why, but will the season 2 section change upon that season airing? The season 2 stuff is all mentioned in casting anyway, so that can really just be cut entirely since right now there's a big duplicated section.
• "He will be playing a "contemporary character and half of a couple known only as 'The Lovers'", according to Tim Stack of Entertainment Weekly." quote needs a citation.
• "The show's producers will be accommodating Levine's busy summer schedule.[11]" we don't really need modifiers like busy added in.
• Paras two and three of conception can be combined.
• "FX has submitted the series to th" That FX can be delinked.
• "drew rankings of 1st or 2nd " first or second.
• Web references without access dates need them added.

I'll put the article on hold for five days and will check back to see if the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 19:33, 19 April 2012 (UTC)

I fixed all the issues except the access dates for the references. They require more time than I currently have. Anyone wish to help? — WylieCoyote (talk) 21:04, 19 April 2012 (UTC)

Tried doing it myself but based on how the refs are set up adding them is difficult. I'll wait a couple days but it's minor enough that I may pass it anyway; the access dates are more to show the links work, which I already checked with a tool. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 00:14, 21 April 2012 (UTC)

On second thought, it's a really minor issue, so I'm just going to pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:53, 21 April 2012 (UTC)

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