Talk:American Life/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:39, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

• Genres in info box should be alphabetical
• on April 22, 2003 → comma after 2003
• its consistence → its consistency
• and felt it was confused → and found it confusing
• The record was the world's 32nd-best-selling album in 2003 and has sold four million copies to date. → This makes no sense
• has garnered two → garnered two
• in a poor commercial performance, with both topping the charts in Spain. → This juxtaposition doesn't work by saying they performed poorly and topped the chart in Spain. I'd re-phrase it "However, they peaked at number one in Spain."
• A release history table might be of value. Just with US, UK and some European territories.
• MTV references publisher is Viacom
• Some dead links to tend to

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This article is really well written. To be honest I can't really fault anything in the main body of prose. References are really good too. Near enough perfect I'd say. On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 18:32, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

 Done all. Jorn ^talk 00:14, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 00:16, 22 June 2013 (UTC)

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