Talk:Anamnesis (Millennium)

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review
Good articleAnamnesis (Millennium) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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October 30, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 17, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Millennium's "Anamnesis" features the song "Dancing Barefoot" by Patti Smith?

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:55, 28 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

I shall review. Ruby 2010/2013 05:55, 28 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

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  • Millennium Group member Lara Means (Cloke) teams up - This would work better with a transition, such as "In this episode, Millennium Group member Lara Means (Cloke) teams up..."
  • Add wiklinks to John Pyper-Ferguson
  • was probably an incorrect later interpretation -> was probably an incorrect interpretation added later.
  • I bet you could find a good image to use based on the episode's unique subject. Perhaps this?
  • both with the series and the times"[8] - needs full stop

Otherwise the article looks good. No current images to worry about and spotchecks turned out fine. On hold for seven days. Ruby 2010/2013 02:41, 30 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your review (don't forget to pester me if you need any). I've addressed the corrections listed, and added File:Magdalen with the Smoking Flame c1640 Georges de La Tour.jpg as an image (I'm a sucker for chiaroscuro). Let me know if there's anything else to deal with. GRAPPLE X 02:53, 30 October 2012 (UTC)Reply
Looks good. I've enlarged the image slightly but feel free to revert if you wish -- the painting's lighting just makes it a bit difficult to see that small. Am happy to pass this one for GA. Nice work, per the usual. If you have a second and feel like reading about two small children... Ruby 2010/2013 03:40, 30 October 2012 (UTC)Reply