Talk:Andorra in the Eurovision Song Contest/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this today --K. Peake 11:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Shouldn't you use semi-final instead of sf in the infobox to be specific?
• "and participating every year" → "and participating every year thereafter"
• "with RTVA citing" → "with the national broadcaster Ràdio i Televisió d'Andorra (RTVA) citing" with the wikilink
• "and as of 2021 the country has yet to" → "and the country has since yet to" per the body not directly mentioning this being in 2021
• "and recent statements from" → "while recent statements from"
• "Ràdio i Televisió d'Andorra (RTVA), the national broadcaster of Andorra, has used" → "RTVA has used"
• Pipe the years to the appropriate Eurovision wikis
• "small population on occasion" → "small population, on occasion"

Contest history

• "to raise the profile of the country" → "to raise their profile"
• "and with an assurance that" → "and an assurance that"
• "in the contest for" → "in the Eurovision Song Contest for"
• Img looks good!
• The viewers and an assembled jury being those who selected the entry is not sourced
• Pipe grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2004#Final
• Pipe final to Eurovision Song Contest 2005#Final
• Are you sure the source actually confirms the nation coming last in the contest?
• "to the final." → "to the final in either of the contests."
• "on their sixth appearance Andorra" → "on their sixth appearance, Andorra"
• Img looks good!
• Are you sure the part about how leaving would prevent further participation is sourced?
• "In recent years renewed" → "In recent years, renewed"
• "and past Andorran Eurovision artists have" → "with past Andorran Eurovision artists having"
• "the nation's last participant," → "Andorra's last participant,"
• "to enable Andorra to" → "for enabling Andorra to"

Selection process

• "in the national final." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2004."
• [38] does not mention the 2006 to 2008 selections

Voting

• "where Andorra participated in the contest" → "where Andorra participated,"
• "However each country was" → "However, each country was"
• Wikilink SMS
• The parts about the nation having a small population and back-up jury results being used on occasion are not sourced
• "when the votes of the country's" → "when the votes of Andorra's"
• "in the semi-final and final." → "in both the semi-final and final."

Contestants

• Good

Related involvement

Heads of delegation

• Year → Year(s)

Commentators and spokespersons

• Img looks good!
• Remove wikilink on Andorra Televisió
• "have provided comment on" → "have provided commentary for"
• Table looks good!

Gallery

• Neat additions and they all look good!

References

• Copyvio score looks amazing at 9.9%!!!
• WP:OVERLINK of European Broadcasting Union on ref 2 and should CH really be capitalised?
• Wikilink Wiwibloggs on ref 29
• Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest on ref 32
• Cite Racó Català as publisher instead for ref 34
• Remove (EBU) from ref 48 for consistency
• rtvasa.ad → Andorra Difusió on ref 51, citing as publisher instead
• esctoday.com → ESCToday on ref 53, citing as publisher instead

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 21:47, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for the quick review again! I believe I have covered all the points above. I have added a few more refs to cover some of the gaps you mentioned, please do shout if you have any further questions or queries on the new info. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 22:44, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

Sims2aholic8 ✓ Pass now, looks good! --K. Peake 08:30, 28 March 2021 (UTC)