Talk:Andy's Ancestry

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Reviewer: Pedro thy master (talk · contribs) 17:25, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: "that she can Andy's educated family". Seems like the word impress is missing from here.

  Whoops! Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: "Nellie later asks Pam to paint a mural in the warehouse". Seems trivial.

  It might seem trivial, but I think it will have a big impact on the season, to be honest.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: Since most of the cast is already linked in parenthesis in the lede, it seem unnecessary to do the same in the plot section.

  I've only done this for consistency, since that's the way the rest of The Office articles are.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

• Cultural references: Add were the language of Kilingon comes from.

  Added.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

• CR: Add to Lizzie Borden a very short summary of who she was like you did with Nixon.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

• CR: "Andy refers to Ladysmith Black Mambazo as "Ladysmith African-American Mambazo" in an attempt to prove he is not racist". That is not referenced.

  It's the one after the next sentence, Paste. I tend to bundle citations.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

• References: In your review of Baby Not On Board you mentioned something about double quotation marks. I believe some of your references have this problem, although I might be wrong, would you mind explaining that issue.

  Whoops! Yeah, the last two had issues. Fixed now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

That's about it. Fix or explain the issues. I'll give it a week. Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 17:25, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

I believe I've addressed everything. Thanks for the review!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:19, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

Congrats. Pass. Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 22:43, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

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