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editThis article has prose more appropriate for a tour guide. It was nice, but didn't fit into WP. I did my best to clean it up to standards; references still need to be fixed. 204.108.0.11 (talk) 22:31, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. It was getting kind of flowery. Will Beback talk 22:49, 12 October 2011 (UTC)