Talk:Ann Washington Craton

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Rollinginhisgrave in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nominator: Delabrede (talk · contribs) 18:17, 3 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 11:11, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I will be quickfailing this article. A few issues:

  • There are multiple (two) citation needed tags currently on the article that have been there for over a month.
  • The writings section is very long, doesn't establish the notability of the articles being summarized, uses idiomatic language "Craton describes the cold shoulder that the American Federation of Labor...", and consists of extremely long blockquotes. They're not COPYVIO, since they're quite old, but they're quite far from summary style. The last text is 220 words of blockquote.
  • The infobox immediately contradicts the first sentence of the lede: died in 1901 vs 1891. It also expands on unsourced information that is not in the article, that she died in Rockville, Maryland.
  • The article does not taken a neutral POV, and reads as hagiographic.

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 11:11, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

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